I usually review pretty harshly...
...But I really liked this film a lot. I think you did quite a good job overall with the film. The ideas were laid out quite well, and he had a clear drive to get where he was going. I dunno if you storyboarded this animation, If you did, great job! If you didn't amazing work done on a whim. The animation was smooth, some of the drawing could be improved upon I suppose, Minor details aside, I enjoyed this quite a lot. I am impressed.
Best of luck to you in your future projects!